Thursday, November 15, 2007

SHADOWS

Shadows creeping stealthily
ready to rob away
Scrapping at the core
till I'm all bare

3 comments:

Sim said...

tu kya likhti hain mere paale kuch nahi padta!!!!! u see me and poems just don't go together! :(

they call me 'simply complicated' said...

i think the shadows are doing a great job! At last their is a 'BEING" in nothingness. Waiting for a very lovely and a new shade to be born as soon as they (shadows) bare u enough...bbyee Dada...tc

Garima said...

loved it !
it brought to mind this wonderful piece i had read somedays ago!

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one day we will
stop waiting for change
with our hands in our pockets

stop wishing through windows
that have been shut

and surrender suspicion
to a smudge
on the chemical sky

- w c pelon

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keep on writing !
cheers!